lpahtillah
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So much I relate to your 'God Knocked On My Heart' especially the line when God asks, 'How high you wanna fly?' Very nice. lsp

Hi,amandak, much do I appreciate your reading my 'criticisms'. We all experience some form of this. Again, thank you.

Thank you, Dianejean57.

Chris? 'Wrapped Up In You'...is brilliantly written. From beginning to end. Yes! Within your expression so much you allow to confess just how you feel. After MANY years of my own poetic writings, I am only recently unpeeling to reveal what it is deeply felt. Easy I've become to realize isn't easy. Thank you. L more »

Mr. Chris E. Morganroth IV? You, sir, are a tremendous artist. Your approach reminds me of Poe. Heartfelt. Deep in expression. Yet, available to the reader. That to do, is an accomplishment. Basic in delivery. Yet touches emotions few poets are unable to commit the doing of it. Congratulations! L more »

Geeessshhh, this is terrific imagery.
Nice.

Hmmm, 'Amazing' Huh? Well...okay! (Smile)

Hi, amandak.. Thank you for your comments. Now and then, I feel I must reveal some insight into my background.

Hi, JdeLorenzo08. Thank you for your comments. It makes me happy

Enrique, thank you for ur comment.

Thank you 4 comments.

Hi, amandak.45897, thank you very much. Lawrence

Hi, Edwin...your comments remind me of what I use to experience on another poetry website. Now, today? I make sure what I write is done. Then close out my submission to Poetry.com. I've also changed my password a few times as well. more »

Hi, Edwin Ray...thank you for your latest comments. Although, I must admit this, I have no idea what they mean. Explain.

Be easy with that Breezy feeling