Analysis of My love is hurt



I am alone, very alone.
None is near to solace me.
I am alone, very alone
as she departed me.

The moon beams seem to me firey.
The breeze doesn't cool my heart.
I am down, very down
after your hateful treachery.

I cann't console my soul
which is fidgeting in pangs.
I know, it will never sing,
the heart soothing songs.

The north steadfast is the witness
of my incomparable misery.
So it sends cool wind, vainly
to repose the contrary.

To me, love has lost its potentiality.
To me, love is synonymous of treachery.
I am in doubt,
If ever it will embrace integrity.


Scheme AbAb xcxb xxxx xbbb cbxb
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11011001 1111101 11011001 110101 0111111 0110111 111101 10110100 1111011 1110001 1111101 01101 0111010 1101000100 1111110 1010100 1111111 111101001100 1101 11011010100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 568
Words 124
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted by swarup on November 03, 2022

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Swarup Bhattacharya

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