Analysis of A Sonnet for the Down Low
Jeremy S. Turner 1980 (Mountain View, Arkansas)
The glimpse of you that gained my eye was bathed
In golden glimmers of sunlight-streaked sweat.
Atop the hill you stood erect and raised
Your arms and stretched your length from hands to feet.
A vision to behold, Adonis come
Again, you are blind to your own beauty.
If I could dare to touch you and succumb
To my own desires, my world would be free.
Yet freedom’s price would come with tears and loss
And your sweat would sting like holy water
To a vampire. For family, I gloss
Over dreams of love. I am not a liar.
I keep my distance so they cannot see
That the she I talk about is a he.
Scheme | ABCDEFEFGHGHFF |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0111111111 010101111 0101110101 1101111111 0101010101 0111111110 1111111001 11101011111 1101111101 0111111010 1010110011 10111111010 1111011101 1011101101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 595 |
Words | 122 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 14 |
Lines Amount | 14 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 459 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 118 |
About this poem
I am a gay man, and a poet. I always say I write a sonnet a year to keep me honest. Thiss one just formed itself during pride month. I kept thinking of the people who were celebrating in secret..
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Written on July 06, 2023
Submitted by jeremyt.40101 on July 06, 2023
Modified by jeremyt.40101 on July 23, 2023
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