Analysis of My Dear Lovely Moon.



I have seen a moon,
Stepping and moving..........
Along in the clouds,
How beautiful that scene was,
In the lap of the clouds,
Aghast, I kept looking,
At the picture again and again,
And kept writing this beautiful essay,
Without any hesitation,
I have seen a form
In the shining clouds,
Then it became silent,
In the lap of the clouds,
That scene seemed
So bright but silent,
That beauty of yours I saw,
Made me intoxicated,
I have seen a beauty,
In the shimmering clouds.............
Which was wonderful, unique..........
And full of amazing beauty.............


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Poetic Form
Metre 11101 10010 01001 1100111 001101 011110 101001001 0110110001 0110010 11101 00101 110110 001101 111 11110 1101111 110100 111010 001001 1110001 01101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 563
Words 113
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 406
Words per stanza (avg) 95

About this poem

The real beauty always remains silent and need not to explain herself about her beauty as it can't be widely explained it can be seen and felt only.

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Written on March 22, 2024

Submitted by brijmohan_p on March 26, 2024

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BrijMohan Poply

After my school I joined Indian Air Force and served for twenty years took release and served for nineteen years in Airports Authority of India and retired on 2006, settled in Harahua, Varanasi till date, I am writing poetry and songs since my childhood in Hindi and started writing in English by 2007 onwards also translated my many Hindi song and poems into English. Poems and songs writing is my passion. Thanks. more…

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