Analysis of The immortal creativity.



The immortal creativity.

I saw him to draw
on a sketch paper.
At first he drew a line
which was very accurate and fine.

Then he drew few more.
I stood there silently
and guessed what could be the next !
Would he be at his best?

At first I was really confused.
So I couldn't move my eyes
and waited eagerly to observe,
the next fine curve.

Her hair was sketched
with some dexterous touch.
It was like deep black pool,
providing a touch of calm and cool.

Then two beautiful eyes
opened like flower petels gradually.
Those were so dark and deep
as if behind the cloud the moon went to sleep.

The acquline nose were promted,
with the touch of few lines.
I was tranfixed and confounded
how a beautiful picture was emanciated!

At last I found a face
like a moon peeping through clouds
and two small parted lips
were like two precious Rubies .

These were the hands of a man
but when such quality was attributed,
that turned into immortality
and will alive in his creativity.


Scheme A XXBB XAXX XCDD XXEE CAFF AXXA XXXX XXAA
Poetic Form
Metre 00100100 11111 10110 111101 111010001 11111 111100 0111101 111111 11111001 1110111 010100101 0111 0111 1111 111111 010011101 111001 1011011000 101101 11010101111 01101 101111 1110010 101001011 111101 1011011 011101 0111010 1001101 11110010100 11010100 0101010100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 976
Words 208
Sentences 16
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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