WHEN LOVE LEAVES
Vinodini Rajan 1979 (Punjab)
WHEN LOVE LEAVES
A little tired in my soul , a bit empty in my heart,
I'm walking aimlessly, hope I find my track ..
My vision is blurred, mind is walking in rain,
I attempt to sew myself, that's so hollow with pain!
In a trench of despair, I try to leave my sorrows there,
And to the roof that I blankly stare,
Praying that my heart repairs.
Reminiscences of life come trembling to hug you today,
But you are hid in the vale of memories, in seraphic comfort and warmth I pray.
When love leaves, tell me where does it go?
And will you tell me when you know?
Or does it find a new home?
In heaven or some other mortal soul?
- Veenu Rajan
About this poem
Written by me on losing my elder sister last year.
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Written on October 07, 2021
Submitted by veenu.navu on August 06, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 746 |
Words | 145 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 2, 2, 3, 2, 5 |
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