Just my thoughts



When you think about life, where do u think you're headed???? It's good to have faith in
God,but without the works then every move or thought that's made is really dead... I
say that bcuz to have a positive thought and don't react to it then therefore that means
it's fruitless... Dead...Just like time spunt not doing anything that positive is wasted time
and energy... What you deposit into life is what life is going to give you bacc.... That's a
wild thing bcuz in life we will run through it moving like people don't have feelings nor
do we care about how our thoughts, decisions,and actions will affect others... That
means not only do we move through life having to take care of ourselves, we have to be
aware of others wants, needs, and feelings... Even the people we aren't close to or
people we don't really know... To care about your family and friends is one thing, but to
care about others to success in life where does that fit??? Again, what you deposit into
life is what life is going to give you bacc... Jesus paid the perfect example by walking
through this world loving everybody no matter who they were or what they did or said
about him.... He showed us that despite being stabbed in the bacc despite being talked
about despite being used despite being slandered despite the fact that he was set up to
be killed by a supposed to be loved one or should i say a trusted friend... Jesus paid the
ultimate price by the gift of his life... But each and every day we breathe at some point
of the day we wind up doing things our way or the way we think things should be
handled or done... Knowing who Jesus is and keeping His ways at all times is a very hard
thing to do one might say.. Hard for some and easy to most... Can you keep the faith
even though every step you take seems to be baccward??? Can you hold strong when
everything that seems to be good is really bad?? Or what you thought was real is only a
mirage??? Yeah it's what we make it but at the same time something's are not in our
control... When you feel your bacc against the wall the most likely human response is to
come out swinging... What if the battle is nothing but a test to see who we choose to
trust??? We're so used to going through life moving the way the world says we should
move... Why??? Cuz it's the only world that we see.... Most people believe in heaven but
it's a place that we've never seen before... Heaven has its own rules and operations the
same way the world does...

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Just something I was thinking at the time

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Written on February 12, 2012

Submitted by tobiaousparks on June 17, 2023

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Stanza Lengths 29

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