My response to "Hello"
LeJuan M McAliley 1975 (NC)
Hello,It's me
I am not the best but know that I am really trying to be
We’re not perfect, you see.
We all strive to be our best but sometimes pain takes over me
Hello, can you hear me
We’re only human so don't fault us for just being a human being
I have no answer, it seems
Maybe we should come to together and work out this problem, please
This is difficult and worry some,what is the next step now
Hello from the darkside, my world seems not to have light
Cause without you my life just isn't as bright
I need you to come and brighten my life
Hello from the inside,my heart just isn't beating right
I know that you are who's taken my heart
But I'll fight for the love,even though we're apart
Hello,It's me
I was just calling to see what kind of state your mind might be
I keep hearing..your voice inside,
Maybe my feelings are corrupted though no longer I can not hide
It's no secret,,we could've been the best two ones combined
About this poem
These are lyrics or poetry in response to Adele‘s song hello.
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Written on June 29, 2022
Submitted by Mactrix75 on November 07, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 937 |
Words | 189 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
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