Spaghetti



“Too brittle and he’ll break”
“Too mushy, a disgrace”
These words traversed my mind,
I prayed they’d toss me on that plate.
From rolling dough to rolling boil
But how long would they wait?
And how much salt to taste,
Lest I be left too bland, too late.
I fought currents, swam afraid
In tangled darkness, danced and swayed
While all they saw were herbs and sauces
In the pan where I’d be laid.
So forget about consensus,
I’m still swirling here defenseless.
I haven’t ditched the pot in several years
But I’ve been strained.
No herbs, no sauce, no salt could
Fix a dish that’s left to waste.
One pinch of care might take me there,
So I’ll stay here just in case.

About this poem

In acknowledgment of my family’s Italian heritage, “Spaghetti” is a simple lyrical piece about contrasting approaches to parenting and their inevitable repercussions on a child whose mind has yet to wholly grasp the world he’s being raised in.

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Written on April 07, 2024

Submitted by aciarell on April 30, 2024

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Words 135
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Stanza Lengths 20

Andrew Ciarelli

Andrew Ciarelli is a 20-year-old poet residing in Chicago, IL. He began songwriting at a young age, eventually transitioning into poetry as a form of self expression. Andrew is currently pursuing a career in advertising at DePaul University, located in the heart of the city, where he finds the inspiration for most of his work. In between studying and writing, he enjoys spending time in nature, as well as exploring the countless opportunities available across the largest urban center in the Midwest. more…

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