Too Heavily Broken
Too Heavily Broken
Too Desperately Choking
I'm Drowning Beneath Crimson Waves
I can't take it anymore
I know what's in store
as I wretch and I writhe in pain
My head starts spinning
There's no use in winning
Both this battle and this war
This all seems propostrous
This headache is monstorus,Everything I feel I abhor
My head starts to sway
a cyclone of pain
as i drag myself to the nearest seat
In my head there's a bullet
Feels like two dogs trying to pull it
apart but then this sensation appears
I'm suddenly freed
The pain's taken heed
and leaves my head without warning
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Submitted on April 15, 2016
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XAB CCD AAC BC XDX XXX EEA |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 556 |
Words | 107 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3 |
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